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CHALLENGE MISSIONspeaker, imagery, form, and sound

speaker, imagery, form, and sound

INDEPENDENT DEFENSEINDEPENDENT TRANSFER

Choose the line break

Draft A: "I carried home / the empty cage." Draft B: "I carried / home the empty cage." The poem concerns a rescued bird that has flown free.

  1. A line break can delay a key word.
  2. Draft A isolates "the empty cage" as the object carried.
  3. Draft B briefly emphasizes the act of carrying.

Which defense of Draft A is strongest?

MODELPoetry Soundboard
LIT
PROVEChoose with evidence
CLUE

Pause. Find what matters. Then make your move.