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G11 SUPER GIO
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LEARN MISSIONthesis, evidence, commentary, and revision

thesis, evidence, commentary, and revision

WORKED MODELWORKED SOURCE

Build a claim from two details

Original passage: A city garden is described first as "a green apology between towers" and later as "the one room no landlord could lock."

  1. Both metaphors connect nature with urban constraint.
  2. An argument needs a claim larger than paraphrase.
  3. Commentary explains why the details belong together.

Which thesis is most defensible?

MODELArgument Portfolio
LIT
PROVEChoose with evidence
CLUE

Pause. Find what matters. Then make your move.