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CHALLENGE MISSIONthesis, evidence, commentary, and revision

thesis, evidence, commentary, and revision

INDEPENDENT DEFENSEINDEPENDENT TRANSFER

Answer the counterreading

A draft argues that a storm symbolizes social conflict. A reviewer notes that the storm also solves the drought and brings neighbors together. The draft currently ignores those effects.

  1. A counterreading can refine rather than destroy a thesis.
  2. Use conflicting evidence explicitly.
  3. Revise the claim so the symbol can carry tension.

Which revision is strongest?

MODELArgument Portfolio
LIT
PROVEChoose with evidence
CLUE

Pause. Find what matters. Then make your move.