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PRACTICE MISSIONcohesive narration across time and perspective

cohesive narration across time and perspective

NEW CASENEW EVIDENCE

Shift perspective

Rewrite target: "I missed the train because I had ignored the warning" from the conductor's perspective. Candidate sentence: "Perdió el tren porque había ignorado mi aviso."

  1. Subject changes from first to third person.
  2. Possessive reference becomes "my warning."
  3. Earlier action remains pluperfect.

Which revision preserves the event sequence and new perspective?

MODELNarrative Voice Reel
SAY
PROVEChoose with evidence
CLUE

Pause. Find what matters. Then make your move.